Show don't tell

“Why do I have to do all the chores every time!!!”As I slammed the door and stomped my way into my bedroom, I slammed it so hard that it looked like it was going to fall of. I kicked all of my toys and threw my viking helmet on the floor, I ripped down the curtains. I was so Angry that I felt like I wanna run away, I looked in my mirror, under my eyes were bages so dark that it looked liked I drew under my eyes with vivid. I punched my mirror, the glass smashed all over the room.“Grace my darling.” I kicked my door open and stormed into the kitchen. “I’m not your DARLING!” I went to the sink to have a drink and and raced back to my bedroom. “Curse you mum” I thought to myself.





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1 comment:

  1. Really good piece of writing there brayden

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